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Sundrop
10-31-2003, 10:40 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-31-2003/30958_DSCN3480.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Carnivorous
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 20x15
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This piece was done without the use of brushes,An eraser was used and toothpicks.Black oil base

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I was wondering if It is too light.Should I have left more black in it.Is your eye going to one certain place.Is there to much involved in this overall piece

mfoxmelanson
10-31-2003, 12:18 PM
This is interesting!! There could be more black-I like black-but I don't think it's necessary. My eye is roaming nicely-I like it!

M.

pero lane
10-31-2003, 01:07 PM
My eye is not drawn to any particular place in this....it's wonderfully engaging and interesting as is!:)

jerryW
10-31-2003, 01:15 PM
wow!
dreamstuff

Gilberte
10-31-2003, 04:21 PM
This is absolutely amazing. My eyes travel all over the painting in search of ..... nothing........ but admiration !

Rabbit Twilight
10-31-2003, 04:24 PM
Just wonderful! It has a bit of an Escher look. Are you working on one of the clay/gesso boards, or a board you prepare yourself. Seems like it would need to be rather smooth to work really well.

JasonY
10-31-2003, 04:42 PM
I love it. Lots of places for the eyes to go. Definatly an interesting piece. This would fit in nice in the abstract forum.

giniaad
10-31-2003, 04:52 PM
silvery! and very nice!
I particularly like the added interest
of the petal like parts
and the centers (stamens) coming out of the circles
and then the fine small parts
in between it all

This looks like it was much fun to do