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Perry
03-23-2017, 03:40 PM
Taking break from doing buildings.
This is 8"x10" on paper
C&c welcome

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Mar-2017/22627-b1.jpg

water girl
03-23-2017, 10:55 PM
I keep returning your painting. I know the title is Boulders, but I see a city in the far distance. There is a lovely feeling of fantasy here.

Perry
03-24-2017, 12:14 AM
Thanks Karen.
Here's a larger photo.
I guess it still may look like a city.:)

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-Mar-2017/22627-bbb.jpg

Charles Perera
03-24-2017, 09:48 AM
What is it ?

Charles

Perry
03-24-2017, 10:45 AM
This is sky, land and a pile of boulders.
My attempt was to show an area that is mostly barren
except for a pile of boulders (the warm area) in the distance.
I don't think I created enough interest in the warm area
since it is quite small and not very readable. I don't know.
I might add something else to this.

Donna T
03-24-2017, 12:40 PM
There is a lot of room to think in those vast, open spaces, Perry. It looks like it might take a very long time to walk to those boulders but that they would be worth it. I want to look up at them and know what is hidden between them. Ok, I'm walking now ...

Perry
03-24-2017, 01:45 PM
I lightened the sky, got rid of the green in the for ground and
changed the boulders.

I think it works better.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-Mar-2017/22627-newrocks2.jpg

Charles Perera
03-24-2017, 02:39 PM
You did very well with your walls, but boulders I am afraid are not very convinsing. You may perhaps paint close ups of real boulders-round big shapes. These look like earth dumps.

Charles

Donna T
03-25-2017, 11:12 AM
I like this version too, Perry. There is still the feeling that the boulders are huge and far away.

Perry
03-26-2017, 10:52 PM
Thanks Donna
I'm calling this finished.

stapeliad
03-29-2017, 02:24 PM
I think the later version works better too.
This is a really subtle nice muted painting that conveys a really interesting still mood. I like it very much.

Perry
03-30-2017, 10:15 PM
Thanks stapeliad