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Wayne Gaudon
10-28-2003, 05:47 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-28-2003/5946_redwoods.jpg

Larger Version Here (http://home.cogeco.ca/~wgaudon/ebayimage/red.jpg)

GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: reds fo winter
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 10 x 30
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
just messing with a piece of board I had lying around ..

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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jerryW
10-28-2003, 06:01 PM
the long format is very fun

Dana Design
10-29-2003, 01:08 AM
I'd like to see more contrast, darks, depth of field in the background. Perhaps would give more focus to the pine tree in the middle ground.

More drama?

Dana (the drama queen)

Wayne Gaudon
10-29-2003, 08:54 AM
looked at this and this will become an 8 x 10 as I didn't think it out and I don't have enough to make the whole interesting.

Later, and thanks.

Andrew
10-29-2003, 01:16 PM
I love the how the snow was indicated and that little pine tree . I think that some added values to the grasses or trees in the background would improve the painting considerably.

Andrew