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Tom Brown
12-31-2016, 11:39 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-31-2016/1986439_IMG_0260.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Field trip
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11x14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Took this photo several years ago, in reality there were more people, but I'm taking this slow and will add one or two peeps a day until it feels done. I may even leave it as is.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
More people Y/N?

La_
12-31-2016, 02:13 PM
naw
i'd work a bit more on the lighter rocks instead
love how you've made the water meet the shore
question the white stuff by the lighthouse, looks like snow
if they're clamming, somebody forgot their red bucket ;)

la

Tom Brown
12-31-2016, 02:20 PM
La, as usual, good suggestions. I'll re-do the white stuff now but my thoughts are that if I go realistic on the foreground rocks then I'll need to go realistic on the people, which I don't want to do, cuz it'll be a total pain in the rear. I have no clue what they were doing, they were just clearly on a class field trip, probably gathering something or other. Thanks for pointing out the white stuff.

Tom Brown
12-31-2016, 04:01 PM
La, better?
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/31-Dec-2016/1986439-IMG_0275.JPG

La_
12-31-2016, 08:41 PM
yup
i hear ya about the not messing with the pale rocks much, it's a fair ton of detail for an 11x14
do muck with the pale bowling balls tho, just above the blue shirt/black shorts fella just left of lower centre ?

la

Tom Brown
12-31-2016, 08:44 PM
La, ack - I never saw that until you mentioned it. Ugh. I'm on it.

Tom Brown
01-01-2017, 08:58 AM
La, bowling balls removed. Thank you, I can always count on you for a keen eye.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-Jan-2017/1986439-IMG_0288.PNG

Tom Brown
01-01-2017, 11:14 AM
I'm going to have to start signing my stuff " T.Brown/La ".

La_
01-01-2017, 02:07 PM
haha, don't you dare, it's all You!

la