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PunkyX
12-19-2016, 04:14 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-19-2016/1993321_Untitled.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created:
Medium: Charcoal
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 40''X32''
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a large still life draw with compressed charcoal, and used eraser to pull through for lights. This paper seems to stain so any suggestions on a charcoal paper that doesn't stain would be appreciated.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any suggestions on a title? Improvements? Technique suggestions?

La_
12-19-2016, 08:11 PM
title suggestion: skeletal still life No. 1

i like it!
what's the globe in the hand on the lap?

la

PunkyX
12-20-2016, 06:45 AM
It's an apple. Thanks for your suggestion.

Joe'sHottie
12-21-2016, 01:33 PM
"Of Vice and Men" :) I like it, but I didn't know it was an apple either . . . my only suggestion would be to somehow clarify that object.

La_
12-21-2016, 01:41 PM
i'd be tempted to put a light dusting of red on the apple, would add a bit of punch, but i don't think it's necessary, just a subjective thought [driven by an Eve series fetish]. given the size of the piece i'm sure in real life the apple is more obviously easy to read.

la

PunkyX
12-21-2016, 02:25 PM
That's an awesome title suggestion Joe'sHottie! I appreciate the feedback guys. :)

billmahler
12-21-2016, 02:28 PM
Title
"These cushions need more padding"
Great work