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arl
11-05-2016, 02:53 AM
I did this with ArtRage 4.5 oil and intuos 5. I feel the highlight on the dress is too much. All comments and advice are appreciated. Thanks.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Nov-2016/114108-Ballet_adj.jpg

Yorky
11-05-2016, 03:42 AM
Nice pose, too blurry.

Doug

LavenderFrost
11-05-2016, 11:39 AM
Yes, remove the highlight. Otherwise it's very nice. You might want to sharpen it up a bit, maybe the arms and legs.

L Skylar Brown
11-05-2016, 02:30 PM
Pose is great. Edges are too ill-defined. Yes, the highlight is the only hard edge, which makes it apart from the rest.

FiredrakeMacFie
11-05-2016, 02:57 PM
I actually like the out-of-focus look of the piece. Kind of gives it an impressionistic look, though as you and the others have said, the hard-edged highlight is a little jarring against the soft look of the rest of it. I'd say either soften the highlight to match the look of the rest of it or remove it

arl
11-06-2016, 01:13 AM
Thank you all for you advice.