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11-05-2016, 02:53 AM
I did this with ArtRage 4.5 oil and intuos 5. I feel the highlight on the dress is too much. All comments and advice are appreciated. Thanks.

11-05-2016, 03:42 AM
Nice pose, too blurry.


11-05-2016, 11:39 AM
Yes, remove the highlight. Otherwise it's very nice. You might want to sharpen it up a bit, maybe the arms and legs.

L Skylar Brown
11-05-2016, 02:30 PM
Pose is great. Edges are too ill-defined. Yes, the highlight is the only hard edge, which makes it apart from the rest.

11-05-2016, 02:57 PM
I actually like the out-of-focus look of the piece. Kind of gives it an impressionistic look, though as you and the others have said, the hard-edged highlight is a little jarring against the soft look of the rest of it. I'd say either soften the highlight to match the look of the rest of it or remove it

11-06-2016, 01:13 AM
Thank you all for you advice.