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Tobie
10-26-2003, 02:23 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-26-2003/30161_Palpeur_d_aucun.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Palpeur d'aucun (follower of none)
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12x12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I have brought this painting to a "finished" piece on 5 separate ocassions, each time, taking a snapshot to see it more objectively. The painting is a gift for a dear friend. I wanted the painting to invoke some storminess with the promise of brighter days ahead. It is my first, and likely last, attempt at the ocean since I am now severely humbled.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Is the boat too large for the composition?
Is the boat too "white"
Are the sail colors ok?
Do I need to do #6?? I.e. complete overhaul?
Be brutal. I've looked at it too long and need to either send it or scrap it!

jerryW
10-26-2003, 03:16 PM
the play of arcs is good
they are strong yet could
be even slightly more
emphasised