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~JMW~
10-14-2016, 12:22 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-14-2016/50585_PA130021.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-14-2016/50585_PA130026.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Getting close to finished, a few refinements to do still.
Comments , crits or suggestions welcome

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any

~JMW~
10-14-2016, 12:24 PM
The auto resize cropped a bit off the sides...

Tom Brown
10-14-2016, 12:53 PM
Personal preference I guess but I think if you had used the reds and yellows that you used in your painting of the round blue vase with flowers in it you would have been better off. The drawing is good but the colors to me look very unnatural. Maybe try burnt sienna or Venetian red with naples yellow.

GoldenG_2016
10-14-2016, 04:50 PM
These two paintings are very beautiful, I particularly like the use of the pink in the sky and the turquoise in the waters. The rock shaping is great in the first one, i can see more definition in that one. The first painting makes me feel like a "lovers sunset cove". Maybe that would be a good title. In the second painting I love the pink foliage on the tree its a great use of texture and color. Beautiful! 👏 great job, the blending of the colors are pretty 😊

~JMW~
10-14-2016, 09:33 PM
Thank you for your comments.
GoldenG_2016 - I do like that title idea...
I was going for a color combo/mood effect and pushed colors a bit.
It is a made up scene too..

We had some excitement around here - the Oregon Coast had 2 Tornadoes this morning.. 60 miles west of me.. Of course nothing like the mid USA gets..
Another storm is due tomorrow..

http://www.kptv.com/story/33391587/national-weather-service-issues-tornado-warning-for-northwest-pacific-county

~JMW~
10-14-2016, 10:37 PM
I had been looking through Oregon coast sunsets and got inspired..
https://www.google.com/search?q=oregon+coast+sunset&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjEwKPA1dvPAhXhv1QKHTUMC9wQ_AUICCgB&biw=1351&bih=620