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07-21-2016, 10:39 AM
Title: Lily's Lilys'
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Canoeing with Lily
MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Due to glare I had to crop out a couple inches from the top and right side.
07-21-2016, 11:12 AM
love this...except the shorts or whatever look too big. I like how the painting tells a story.
07-21-2016, 12:51 PM
Excellent. Very nice color scheme. I hope Lily was wearing sunscreen, although from the look of it, she would get sunburned. The "shorts" aren't too big, because they aren't shorts. I assume that they are the kind of camping attire that has kangaroo pockets for carrying stuff.
07-21-2016, 01:01 PM
LOL, no they were shorts, but the day began chilly and we were wearing sweatshirts. This is after it warmed a bit and the sweatshirt was tied around her waist.
07-22-2016, 09:35 AM
Detail of head
07-22-2016, 06:48 PM
Compositionally, the piece is highly unbalanced, with a huge portion of the interest being placed on the far right side, and very little on the left in which to balance its visual dominance.
I think you have depicted the calm serenity of the scene well. :)
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