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rdwagg
10-23-2003, 02:16 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-23-2003/25393_jw.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: reworked Charcoal portrait of John Wayne
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Charcoal
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 17x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a piece that I had posted once before I've gone back and attempted to correct some major flaws. Also added the darker background.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What could be done to make this better.

TScottDove
10-24-2003, 02:27 AM
not a bad likeness.
i think loosening up a bit would help this a lot. it's very "tight" right now, the hair in particular - as if it's one piece, as opposed to individual strands.