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Wayne Gaudon
10-23-2003, 01:10 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-23-2003/5946_passagewc2.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-23-2003/5946_oldnew.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Passage Reworked
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 30 x 30 inches
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
did this earlier and when I put it in the drying rack I didn't like the darks up front so I changed them and after that I had to change the yellow and then the green and then the blue and I ended up with a whole new piece .. this one shows the correct sky color and I think by darkening down the front and putting less in there it makes it a better painting.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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Rabbit Twilight
10-23-2003, 02:00 PM
Wayne, don't hit me with a rolled up newspaper......but I liked the first one best. I liked the way the light led me into the painting and up into the distance. :(

Paintonbrush
10-23-2003, 02:24 PM
I like the second one.....solid, and your palette is fabulous

dornberg
10-23-2003, 02:28 PM
simple green shape goes better
with other shapes

roberj
10-23-2003, 03:54 PM
I like the new version better, but I kinda miss the yellow too.


Bob

Wayne Gaudon
10-23-2003, 04:17 PM
thank you all ..
LOL .. reworked it again .. added more greens to the front foilage and lightened up the field by adding some lighter greens and yellow. If I touch it again today it will be to toss it out ..
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Oct-2003/5946-passagewc3.jpg

YLCIA
10-23-2003, 04:20 PM
I liked the second version more then first or third as it is more harmonius:)

Julia

JustjoGA
10-23-2003, 04:43 PM
Well....... I liked the first one before any reworks :)

Gia
10-23-2003, 06:12 PM
I`m not a landscape painter, but this has a wonderful depht!

Rich Williams
10-23-2003, 06:20 PM
Wayne one of the hardest things an artist has to learn is when to put the brush down and leave it there.


Rich

Wayne Gaudon
10-23-2003, 09:19 PM
thanks all ..

Wayne one of the hardest things an artist has to learn is when to put the brush down and leave it there.

think I'll put it away now ..
count them .. 5 in a row in the trash .. guess I need to get out of the studio and beat my head against a different wall.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Oct-2003/5946-Art_030.jpg

wolvenp
10-24-2003, 01:17 AM
Wayne,

My problem with the painting, both versions, was that the trees had just too many skyholes, taking away from the sense of their mass. They didnt look like real trees to me. That said, I think your paintings relate a tremendous, vibrant energy, and show wonderful brushwork.

Dana Design
10-24-2003, 04:08 AM
Your work is good. Keep painting!
Dana

Gilberte
10-24-2003, 05:28 PM
:crying:
The first one was alive and kicking .....
The second one ? I dunno .......

jerryW
10-24-2003, 06:18 PM
your trash is fricken gorgeous.
paint that as a still life!

jerryW
10-24-2003, 06:19 PM
ps I like the image at top of thread too.

boopie
10-25-2003, 01:51 AM
Wayne I liked the first one...:)