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Tepid Soda
07-03-2016, 05:39 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-03-2016/1986193_Oiwa_2_J_PEG.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Oiwa
Year Created:
Medium: Digital
Surface: Other
Dimension: 900 pi X 1113 pi
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
A digital drawing of the onryo Oiwa from the Japanese folktale Yotsuya Kaidan.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I would like some feedback for color, composition, and anatomy. Please feel free to critique anything else about the painting.

Jon
07-04-2016, 08:20 PM
Welcome!
This image certainly captures the horror of the story.
The figure appears to be floating so you need some shadow to ground it and placing your main figure in the center can be a bit boring although the hair around her helps.
I think you have done well with the anatomy and the colors.