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Anonymous
07-02-2016, 06:02 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-02-2016/1986193_Ayumi_AGAIN_(1)_2_JAY_PEG.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Corpse Pary Ayumi WIP
Year Created:
Medium: Digital
Surface: Other
Dimension: 500 pi X 484 pi (1.7
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a work in progress of a fan art I have been working on. The coloring and shading is not complete.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I would like feedback for mainly anatomy and composition. Please feel free to critique anything else about the drawing though.

La_
07-03-2016, 02:26 PM
legs seem too long (if she was hugging her knees they'd be well below her shoulders)
anime eyes are different (less round, typically)
her nose is typically no more than a dot.
(i know Nothing about anime, and had never heard of 'pary ayumi', i just googled it to compare)

la