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arl
06-28-2016, 09:13 AM
This painting is based on an image in the RIL. It was done with Corel Painter 12 and Intuos 5. I used mainly oil bristle and glaze. The support is Coarse Cotton Canvas. Over the bottle I used Dissolve feature from Photoshop. All comments and advice are appreciated. Thanks.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/28-Jun-2016/114108-study_still_life_ril_jpg_adj.jpg

LavenderFrost
06-28-2016, 10:00 AM
Nice work. Just a couple of things I notice. The grapes are very bright on my screen, not a very realistic colour. And the apple seems to have a different light source.

Monastic Bat
06-28-2016, 11:01 AM
This is nice work and I agree with Michelle. I would also recommend a bit more definition with some harder edges. I am not sure if it is your style or my screen but your work appears to be soft or blurred. I hope this critique is helpful.
Regards,
Greg.

arl
06-29-2016, 11:01 AM
Thanks Michelle and Greg for your help.

laika
06-29-2016, 02:03 PM
I agree that the apple doesn't agree with the light source on the the other objects. Nice work, otherwise :)

b'anna
06-30-2016, 02:52 PM
I agree with what has been already said but it is a nice soft painting. I especially like richness of the shadows!