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vrashton
10-21-2003, 01:32 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-21-2003/17686_hall1jpeg.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Hall
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 20 x 25
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Soft pastel on Schminke paper

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Should I remove the wall on the right side? or leave it the way it is? Does it work right now?

ArtyHelen
10-21-2003, 05:15 PM
Personally I like it very much just the way it is. :)

Helen

roberj
10-21-2003, 06:08 PM
I like the abstraction of the composition. Causes you to look a little longer. Would like it better in oil.

Bob

Paintonbrush
10-21-2003, 06:52 PM
Leave it....almost at first look, its a pendleton blanket....
then to focus and see your light,........one is drawn in...

vrashton
10-21-2003, 08:22 PM
Helen thanks for the comment, glad you like it.
Bob, never painted in oil, so it's either pastel or acrylic. Tried it in acrylic but couldn't get the feel I wanted. One day I need to try oils.
Paintonbrush, pendleton blanket? no idea what that is.

Thank you very much for the comments, it always helps to get other opinions, sometimes I just can't seem to see things objectively.
Val

dornberg
10-23-2003, 02:40 PM
i like the mental play