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Akenero
11-30-2015, 09:46 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-30-2015/1978195_Strike_evelynn_final_look.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-30-2015/1978195_Stealth_Evelynn_Final.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-30-2015/1978195_WOW.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Evelynn Visual Upgrade
Year Created:
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8.5*11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
These are concept drawings of what i'd do if I could give evelynn from league of legends a visual update, shading is meh, and the quality of the drawing is skewed due to my use of my iphone camera.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Look like evelynn?
What does her expression say specifically?
Does she look dangerous?

synnworld
12-01-2015, 07:53 AM
Well for starters, the biggest problem with your pictures when you took them is that you didn't take in count for the lighting and your shadow. I work a lok on 18x24 inche paperbad even my university doesn't have a scanner that can handle that size, so I ave to take pictures with my phone, but I try to get the shot as clear as possible and try to shoot for decent lighting.

Onto the drawing itself, I really can't tell what's going on with the head in the second drawing. The closest one that looks dangerous is the last one. The first one looks like she is posing for a Rick cover album, the second one is just standing there, but the third actually have action in it. She is at a diagnol and moving. I would've also included that passive of hers by making parts of her body vanishing.

The first one expression doesn't feel like that of an assassin to me. The second one looks like she is going to eat ya, and the third actually fits the pose.

Hope I answered all your questions.