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synnworld
11-29-2015, 11:36 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-29-2015/1978204__20150903_084422.JPG


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-29-2015/1978204__20150903_181517.JPG


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/29-Nov-2015/1978204-_20151129_100031.JPG

GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: The Bunny Brigade
Year Created:
Medium: Charcoal
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 18x24 inchea
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
First rule about the bunny brigade, don't talk about the bunny brigade!!!

In the year xxxx, bunnies must battle to protect their planet from a unknown extraterrestrial threat!

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I would like to hear thoughts about the value, composition. Oh forget it, just tear me apart!

Dana Design
11-29-2015, 01:52 PM
Tear you apart??? We wouldn't do that to you! Welcome to WC!

This is fun and imaginative without being cartoonish and really shows some adeptness with drawing! The only thing I'm missing here are bunny paws!

synnworld
11-29-2015, 06:43 PM
Tear you apart??? We wouldn't do that to you! Welcome to WC!

This is fun and imaginative without being cartoonish and really shows some adeptness with drawing! The only thing I'm missing here are bunny paws!thanks for the response and the welcome. I was debating on addng paws when I started this piece, but ultimately decided against it.

La_
11-29-2015, 07:19 PM
bugs bunny's brothers from another mother, in space, fun
the bottle gun is not shooting straight, sharp veer to 'bug's' left

la

synnworld
11-30-2015, 10:32 AM
Thanks for the reply, I saw that after I had hit it with the fixative

Bodhi Peace
11-30-2015, 06:14 PM
My honest critique is that i like the second one the best.
From that one tho, I would have added paws, a fierce, determined expression, some haunches for the legs, a less-pointed tail, but the composition is good.
It's a good pose on the front bunny, but when you introduced black "space" into it with lots of distractions... the back bunnies don't POP and the back is overall too busy. And the right bunny's ears look like a helmet.
I started wondering about how they breathe without an atmosphere.

synnworld
11-30-2015, 09:57 PM
Thanks for the reply, they are alien bunnies; who needs air?

I'm also obsessed with scenes so I can see why it feels to busy.

maryinasia
11-30-2015, 10:12 PM
I like his stance

synnworld
11-30-2015, 10:53 PM
Thanks for the reply.