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Jan van Kleeff
11-27-2015, 02:33 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-27-2015/1978046_DUO_1280.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Cross duo
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 70 x 90 cm
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
My first nude.
Photo taken by my colleague Marc van den Berg.
3 months of painting.
Finished in 2013.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any comment is welcome.

Dana Design
11-27-2015, 10:57 AM
Very well done! The figures are very good (love the hair) and the satin fabric is very believable. Welcome and thank you for sharing this!

Andrewcody
11-27-2015, 03:45 PM
Exceptional work.
The only weakness in my opinion being the composition
Regards
Andrew

greensyster
11-27-2015, 07:59 PM
Enjoyed your website - your distinctive style carries through regardless of subject. By way of improvement, I would suggest looking at the skin of the foreground figure. To take away the flatness, sheen could be added along the high areas. Presently there are two paintings melded into one. The figures and The Fabric. By adding the sheen I suggest you will get the sheen you may need.