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Jose Paul
11-23-2015, 09:21 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-23-2015/33253_womenattable.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Women at table
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18 x 24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Painted this after I heard about the Paris attacks.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I know that the whole painting is very sketch-like. Does the style work for what it is?

Dana Design
11-23-2015, 10:43 AM
It's a bit too sketchy for my taste and looks unfinished. The legs of the woman on the right; the form of the arms of the woman on the left.

I do like the composition and think that with a bit more attention paid to this, you'll have a very nice painting. Keep painting!

Jose Paul
11-23-2015, 01:14 PM
Thank you for the feedback! Yes, the forms need to be better defined. And there are places that are incoherent. Taking this back to easel.

Andrewcody
11-23-2015, 04:30 PM
Jose, The woman on the left is head heavy, perspective needs a little work even for a loose approach. Bendy arms need better bones.
Regards
Andrew

Jose Paul
11-23-2015, 06:53 PM
Thank you, Andrew.

- Jose