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varna
11-20-2015, 06:39 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-20-2015/167643_DSC05145.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: friends
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 14x18
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
comments welcome

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
critique most welcome

jessw
11-20-2015, 08:32 PM
The right tiger's right ear looks slightly odd to me, just not quite the shape of a typical tiger ear, but then again I havn't seen many tigers in my lifetime (maybe that's a good thing, haha).

Nice contrast with the blue for the eyes.

Good job :)

Amhahn
11-21-2015, 05:32 PM
I love the bright colors!! Overall I think it is very good. The area where the Tigers touch, their ears look odd. Possibly adding some shading would give this area depth.

Bodhi Peace
11-21-2015, 06:35 PM
Now that it is pointed out, the ears are different. But it is WC so no going back?
Beautiful eyes.
The white things in the back distract a bit.
Nice black too.

Dana Design
11-22-2015, 12:12 PM
I like your style!

Laurelwood
11-22-2015, 05:05 PM
This has a graphic feel to it. I do love the bold colors and tone of the painting. There is very little shading/rendering, which might just be your style/intent ? I would have liked to see more of that, though. The 2 heads do seem merged together...and the tonal values too similar with light source uncertain.

Nice job overall however!

RCharleston
11-22-2015, 10:24 PM
I too like the graphic-arts-ness about this. I could see it enlarged to billboard size. As has been mentioned, the overlap of the ears that meet concerns me a little...

Andrewcody
11-23-2015, 02:30 AM
Very nice result, vibrant and fun
Regards
Andrew

varna
12-16-2015, 05:19 PM
Thank you everyone, all well noted!

Jules Hilliard
12-19-2015, 07:40 PM
I see the same! The two seem to merge into one. I too believe a little more shading would help; and possibly some highlight.