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nickiedoodledandy
11-17-2015, 10:50 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-17-2015/1974790_22419615410_cd0fffa7c8_o.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Largemouth Leap
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8x10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I have never taken an art class. I am new to this, truly self taught.
I do this for fun only, but want to improve.
I do know the tail is unproportionate.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Choice of colors?
Water?
Proportions?

jessw
11-17-2015, 10:55 PM
I'm thinking that I would like to see a little more of the fish's surroundings, but this may just be a personal preference. Good work :)

nickiedoodledandy
11-18-2015, 06:21 AM
Thank you, I thought of that also, after the fact of course. I did this for a youth silent auction for our church and was not wanting too much background/color not knowing a persons preferance when wanting to purchase a painting. Thank you for your time and your thoughts.

Wassie
11-18-2015, 12:30 PM
Up close and personalI I love itI