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11-08-2015, 07:15 PM
This went another direction than intended but feel it fits in the abstract landscape category….
24 X 36 oil on canvas.
11-08-2015, 08:33 PM
I would call it more contemporary than abstract. The orange islands just make this piece. S'not ordinary thataway
11-09-2015, 07:19 AM
Certainly not realist and the colours work well, good choice. Only slight niggle is the sky and clouds, could be less accurate if you see what I mean.
11-09-2015, 10:44 AM
Thanks for the feedback and greatly appreciate it. :)
I completely agree that the sky should have been less defined. I was trying to create a stormy scene with vivid colors in the foreground but that could have been achieved in a more harmonious way. Next time, I will try to avoid this approach.
Strong colors and good composition.
11-10-2015, 12:21 PM
11-12-2015, 04:44 PM
The colors are big-badda-boom, nice! I enjoy how you change the colors towards the horizon...
I agree with Derek that there is something about the various detail levels... but I like the skyline you created and wouldn't wanna miss it. Maybe blur up or losen up that tree on the right side to create some photo focus effect?
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