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drorn
11-04-2015, 10:15 AM
80x60 cm oil & acrylic on canvas

birdhs
11-04-2015, 10:51 AM
This is soooo good
seems like the cover for a murder mystery lover's triangle novel
you seem to be able to nail these expressions
a rare talent.

she will dominate any room this hangs in
and people will gather around her
making up stories of who she really is
the wife, the mistress, the victim, the murderer?

love this

greggo

drorn
11-04-2015, 03:32 PM
Thanks greggo
You are so optimistic and positive, wish i could be...

trufflecat
11-04-2015, 03:54 PM
Very nice! A little Hopper-esque. Dark and sultry.

Two small things - should her glass have a stem? and her left elbow looks like it's in the ashtray.

Nice job.

drorn
11-05-2015, 02:00 PM
Thanks trufflecat

Katie Black
11-05-2015, 06:49 PM
Wonderful!

drorn
11-05-2015, 11:24 PM
Thank you katie

Hairy wolf
11-06-2015, 03:19 AM
Great! But the small details Susan pointed out to could easily be fixed.

drorn
11-06-2015, 04:27 AM
Thanks hairy
I havent decided yet about the glass, its can be a coffe...
And fhe elbow ... I will

graphicali
11-06-2015, 06:54 AM
Nice work drorn

drorn
11-06-2015, 07:30 AM
thanks graphicali
how is the elbow and ashtray now?

Gollator
11-08-2015, 02:25 PM
I like the colors in the second piece a bit better, but then again, I simply enjoy all types of blue and blues. I do enjoy that there is a glimmer in the eye now which I missed before... very nice.

Ash tray is not as confusing as in the first one.

drorn
11-08-2015, 03:58 PM
I like the colors in the second piece a bit better, but then again, I simply enjoy all types of blue and blues. I do enjoy that there is a glimmer in the eye now which I missed before... very nice.

Ash tray is not as confusing as in the first one.

thanks daniel
nothing changed except from the ashtray... maybe the terms of light
was diferent in the sec' pic