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EnPassant
11-03-2015, 05:40 PM
This is oils, 10 x 12. C&C appreciated. Thanks in advance.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/03-Nov-2015/1966540-Fringe.JPG

La_
11-04-2015, 04:27 PM
that's pretty adorable! nicely done.
too strong on the 'black' with the eyeliner, especially by the tear ducts.

la

DMSKJ
11-05-2015, 05:53 PM
I agree with La on the black on the eyes. Also, a bit more detail in the hair and clothing would make this a very pleasing portrait. Very nice so far.
Dottie

truntle
11-09-2015, 07:19 AM
the shirt looks flat to me with the detailing around the collar a little on the rushed side, and maybe some more detailing on the neck and hair.

The face seems well done, like a lot of time was spent on it. I do think she is adorable, she just seems unfinished.

EnPassant
11-09-2015, 12:31 PM
Thanks all for your helpful comments. Yes the 'eye liner' is too dark. I fixed it and it is much better. Rest of the painting was done quickly as it is only a test piece.