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Bevahlee
11-01-2015, 03:43 PM
little door hanger piece. 12 x 16

birdhs
11-01-2015, 11:44 PM
not to be aknowin what this means to me yet

if I stop athinkin' so hard
I met jes be warmin' uppa to it
enjoying that fancy and sufistikated markly-markerings
right fancy Miss Beverly
right fancy

greggo

La_
11-02-2015, 12:26 AM
i don't feel qualified to critique this so take it for what it's worth
i prefer the comp orientation of the greyscale one, in greyscale
but prefer the coloured one/comp except for the pink vertical and the larger doorway top left corner that shoots/pulls me out of the pic.
so many wonderful shapes/textures/things to explore tho so i do enjoy that

la

DMSS
11-02-2015, 07:41 AM
This is subtle, has depth. The variety of whites work with the muted yellows. A success!

Bevahlee
11-02-2015, 08:17 AM
thanks all. La, that little portal allows us to escape to a dream for a short span, but we are pushed down again into the reality of our space. Maybe earth, water, chambered walls and up again into that little portal to the heavens. Course, when I composed it, I was only thining of shapes and interest within the shapes. It has to work as values and comp first. If the values work the rest comes along for the ride

harrymspitz
11-02-2015, 10:25 AM
Both quite muscular, smart and well balanced. The left one contains a pretty lavender flower and the right has bulging biceps.

graphicali
11-02-2015, 11:30 AM
Nice work, I prefer the orientation shown in the greyscale version, but either way round it is good.

Bevahlee
11-02-2015, 12:25 PM
Or how about this..Throne of Tut"

graphicali
11-02-2015, 12:37 PM
Excellent title. The sign of a good painting, it works every way round!

Wilsonart
11-02-2015, 12:58 PM
I love this however you want to present it. I do believe it's my favorite
of yours that I've seen.
Sophisticated yet earthy, and would look great hanging on my door.:)

Hairy wolf
11-03-2015, 12:11 AM
Either way, excellent work.