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phacops2015
10-28-2015, 07:17 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-28-2015/1977066_IMG_5927.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Emerald Eyes
Year Created:
Medium: Colored Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 5 x 7 inch
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Hi group, I tried to do the best with the hair face in he animals...

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
How Improve the hair density without modify the colors or shapes focussed at realistic drawing?

Dana Design
10-29-2015, 12:40 PM
I like this! It's quite realistic and nicely done. The hair looks authentic and I would leave it!

phacops2015
10-29-2015, 02:06 PM
Thank you..

Really the hair was a challenge for me...

:clap: :wave:

greensyster
10-29-2015, 10:28 PM
You have done the fur very well! I think the center of interest is the eyes and I think there is room for a bit of improvement. For example - top of the eye might have a darker shading to indicate they are under the overhang. And the eyeballs would be more ball-sh if lower side right or left on each had a little lighter area as though light was coming thru and going past the pupil. Just a thought. Nice work.

phacops2015
10-30-2015, 04:11 PM
Ok Marie,

Thanks for the advises, I will try to do it to improve the eyes shape.

Regards..