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phacops2015
10-28-2015, 07:09 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-28-2015/1977066_IMG_5919.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Animal love
Year Created:
Medium: Colored Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: letter size
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
Hi group, I want to you make some recommendations or critiques to improve every day and every draw...I am novel on it.

Thanks

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
How can I improve realistic techniques with color pencils?

Dana Design
10-29-2015, 12:42 PM
I don't know what the colors are for giraffe eyes but I would give them a bit of color. Perhaps browns or yellows or a combination of the two?

YOu could darken some of the spots to make it appear there is more depth in the fur.

It's very nice and I would love to see more from you!

phacops2015
10-29-2015, 02:04 PM
Thank you for the comments..

I will try with brown eyes and to give more depth to the spots with a combination between dark brown a nd dark yellow...

Regrads... :wave: :thumbsup:

greensyster
10-29-2015, 10:39 PM
Gorgeous - Mum and bub! You have captured the emotion so well. One thing though -they look a little flat. If the light is coming from the sun then I would think that adding some shading to both would be a benefit - it would also give those wonderful necks a roundness.

phacops2015
10-30-2015, 04:08 PM
Thank you Marie.

I will try to give more shadow to express depth with dark brown and some light black...

Regards.. :wave: