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sophie77
10-19-2015, 12:54 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-19-2015/1062952_cath_tarawhiti.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Harriette
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24x18
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Used a reference photo by Cathleen Tarawhiti http://cathleentarawhiti.deviantart.com/art/Harriette-set-434483155

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I would like to get general feedback. Had issues with her eyes in particular

La_
10-19-2015, 01:46 PM
nicely done

have a look at her left eye [viewers right]

see the little sideways c shape on the right side of that eye - it's a marvellous little c (or gentle sideways v in a more clear/crisp photo)

la

TerryCurley
10-19-2015, 02:08 PM
This is such a beautiful painting. I do not have the skills to give a critique but I want to say how much I love this portrait.

sophie77
10-19-2015, 05:15 PM
La, thanks a lot! eye's fixed...
Thank you Terry!

Andrewcody
10-19-2015, 05:30 PM
Great help from La
I would look at her left hand, a little muddled with the background.
Like your work
Regards
Andrew

sophie77
10-20-2015, 08:34 PM
Thanks Andrew, I'll define it some more.