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TerryCurley
10-15-2015, 08:37 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-15-2015/1966386_small_fruit_on_lettuce.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Fruit on Lettuce
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 7x14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Just finished this one. I tried to get the light source coming from the above left.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm trying to improve my composition. I'm open to an honest critique and suggestions of how this could be improved.

La_
10-16-2015, 02:20 AM
rich and adorable
the grapes on the left seem too large, could even be prune plums at the top left area
i'd like to introduce you to Delmus (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/search.php?searchid=59740), who doesn't stop by often, but when he does i always learn something from his posts. he loves flowers and fruit, etc and is exceptionally good at them. the link is to a WC! list of posts he's started, various works, but there's one close to the top of the list with grapes in it. i think you'd enjoy looking over his stuff.

la

TerryCurley
10-16-2015, 07:55 AM
rich and adorable
the grapes on the left seem too large, could even be prune plums at the top left area
i'd like to introduce you to Delmus (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/search.php?searchid=59740), who doesn't stop by often, but when he does i always learn something from his posts. he loves flowers and fruit, etc and is exceptionally good at them. the link is to a WC! list of posts he's started, various works, but there's one close to the top of the list with grapes in it. i think you'd enjoy looking over his stuff.

la

I know you are right about the grapes. I just got carried away, don't know why that happens to me sometime. I'll check out Deimus's posts. Thank you La.

TerryCurley
10-19-2015, 05:35 PM
I worked more on this one. I think it's better now.