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TerryCurley
10-11-2015, 11:55 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-11-2015/1966386_half_tulips.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Dancing Tulips
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This type of tulip is called Painted Tulips because of the red stripes that look like they are painted on them.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
How could this be improved.

La_
10-12-2015, 03:20 PM
this is lovely
the bottom flowers red centre seems a little bit pasted on, in that it doest show the separation of petals that it crosses over, but other than that, yay

la

TerryCurley
10-13-2015, 03:02 PM
Thank you la. I do feel this is one of my better ones. I see what you mean about the red line going across the peddle break...whoops...thank you for pointing that out.

gebhm
10-13-2015, 05:18 PM
I really like this one. Wouldn't change a thing.

fedetony
10-14-2015, 06:00 AM
I like the painting, I'm not aware if its on purpose, but maybe you should try to blend a bit more the lights and the dark yellows, it will soften the petals and make them look more natural. Watch for the light sources, they must be compatible.