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TerryCurley
10-09-2015, 07:04 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-09-2015/1966386_small_sunset.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Sunset
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a simple picture I did today.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What could I have done to make this a better picture?

Anfair
10-09-2015, 08:08 PM
Very colorful if you want more realism make horizon straight instead of curved and typically sky is a lighter color compared to water. I would also add more blue to water and sky similar to blues near person. But if you are going for bright expressionistic painting you did it!

TerryCurley
10-10-2015, 10:04 AM
I didn't even realize my horizon line was curved. On the drawing of it I made it straight with a ruler but I lost it when I painted it. I'll fix it today.

I like your suggestions of adding more blue to the water. At this point I don't know how I can make the sky lighter but I will remember what you said on the next picture with sky and ocean.

Thank you for you comment.

TerryCurley
10-10-2015, 11:26 AM
Did some tweaking.