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TerryCurley
10-05-2015, 07:34 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-05-2015/1966386_small_Daisies_in_Red_Vase.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Daisies in a Red Vase
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12 x 16 inches
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Daisies in a Red Vase

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
An honest critique would be appreciated so I can improve.

~JMW~
10-05-2015, 11:19 PM
The flowers and the vase are nicely done.
For me the background and the table colors almost overpower the vase & flowers.
I think adding a stronger shadow at the base of the vase will set in down more onto the table. Perhaps a darker muted brown on the table will compliment the rest nicely..
A purple/ blue makes a nice shadow color, much better than a black or gray..

Strong light will make for strong shadows , even the flowers and leaves would have shadows..

TerryCurley
10-06-2015, 12:56 PM
Thank you for your response and I plan to work on it more later today. I will enhance the shadow of the vase.

TerryCurley
10-06-2015, 06:36 PM
I worked on this some more.