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Dee350
10-01-2015, 03:21 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-01-2015/1974433_image.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Autumn in Arrowhead Park
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 10 X 15
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
There was no fog/mist in my photo. I wanted to capture a horizontal band of mist that did not reach the sky nor the ground. I am aware of the hard lines in portions of the painting. The blues in this photo are deeper than in the painting.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Composition: does adding the fog throw off the balance of the scene?

I am trying for a loose rendition. Have I succeeded in that?

What changes would make this painting stronger?

Dee350
10-01-2015, 03:27 PM
I will re submit.

Andrewcody
10-01-2015, 10:43 PM
I think this is a good start.
Might not be what you intended but it is still worthy of you continuing
Regards
Andrew