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TerryCurley
10-01-2015, 02:45 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-01-2015/1966386_half_size.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Ocean Shore
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Not going for photo realism but more a stylized realism (if that makes sense).

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm trying hard to improve and I read and appreciate all criticism and try to use it to improve the next one.

TerryCurley
10-01-2015, 07:37 PM
Put in some changes.

Andrewcody
10-01-2015, 10:42 PM
There is that ship again, full sail into the rocks?
Regards
Andrew

TerryCurley
10-03-2015, 09:06 AM
There is that ship again, full sail into the rocks?
Regards
Andrew

LOL -- he is headed to shore and will drop sails and anchor before he hits the beach where the rocks are. :D

TerryCurley
10-03-2015, 12:31 PM
Got good suggestions and I will keep them in mind for the next ocean scene. Added shadows to the rocks.

lunchbox
10-03-2015, 02:44 PM
By the use of light and the placement of your rocks you have successfully made the ship the center of interest. However, your ship is floating on the horizon line rather than being in the water, easy fix. Nice use of texture here.

TerryCurley
10-06-2015, 01:07 PM
Thank you I will work on it later today.