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09-27-2015, 04:36 PM
Hi everyone! I think I only posted once before in this forum, but I enjoy looking at the beautiful art around here. This is one of my latest works, acrylic on canvas, 24x30. I would like your thoughts, critics, suggestions etc on it. Thank you in advance!http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/27-Sep-2015/200764-2015-09-27_16.32.33.jpg

09-27-2015, 04:42 PM
Red being such a powerful color usually overwealms but you pulled off a perfect balance here. Well done,

09-27-2015, 06:46 PM
thank you for your nice words!

Hairy wolf
09-27-2015, 11:51 PM

09-28-2015, 03:50 AM
A very intriguing piece. It keeps my interest and I see something different each time I look.

09-28-2015, 11:56 AM
Thank you, Hairy wolf and graphicali!

Hairy wolf
09-28-2015, 12:09 PM
Very good in terms of composition and colors.
For me, the black outlines are unnecessary. Without them, things will be a little more vague and the shapes will melt somehow into one another in softer harmony.

09-28-2015, 12:32 PM
Thank you for your suggestions and observations! The shapes are outlined in fluid alizarin crimson, but they do appear black because of the quality of the photo. I think that maybe some lost edges will improve this piece. I'm not sure if I can modify it at this point, since the lines are texturally prominent as well, but I will keep this in mind for my next work.