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limedio
09-09-2015, 05:17 AM
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http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-09-2015/1975331_10.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Atardecer La Mancha
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 20 x 30 cm
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
Watercolor on Arches paper (300 gr). Sunset light in La Mancha

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I want assessment of the whole work

maryinasia
09-09-2015, 11:43 AM
love this! except maybe the stray mark on the right...

love the sense of vastness and depth

limedio
09-10-2015, 02:33 AM
Thanks maryinasia! I would appreciate you visit my blog to see more watercolor jobs

amytheartist
09-10-2015, 03:36 PM
Maybe a little more blue hue in the mountains. That would really enhance the oranges you have throughout the landscape. ( my screen they look purple). Maybe something going on more with the sky. Either a few soft clouds or more light on one side. Ultimately I think it's awesome! I love the shading you have in the trees or the bushes. I love the dimension you have in this scene. My eye follows through really well right into the beginning of the mountains. Nice job:)

limedio
09-11-2015, 05:38 AM
Thanks for your comments amytheartist !!