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djambalawa
08-29-2015, 04:35 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-29-2015/1973095_SpeewahJumpUpPastelWeb.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Doon Doon
Year Created:
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 36 x 24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is from a photo of mine in the Kimberlies of Weste<br> Australian. Done in pastel.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm happy with this but think a foreground object like a big tree would help it.. although the photo doesn't have one. Any critique welcome as I'm only a beginner and it would all be helpful.

maryinasia
08-29-2015, 05:32 AM
beautiful

Dana Design
08-29-2015, 11:32 AM
This is very well done! Good perspective and sense of distance. My only suggestion would be to soften the tops of the hills in the far distance.

Love the shadows and the road is very believable. Good work! Keep painting.