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OziAfricana
08-14-2015, 01:39 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-14-2015/13874_IMG_0008-1-1.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-14-2015/13874_IMG_0007-1.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Sunset
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 80 x 60
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
DBright diptych made alla prima.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Does it work as a unit?

OziAfricana
08-14-2015, 01:41 AM
Each canvas is 80 by 60 cm. Sorry I couldn't place them side by side.

La_
08-14-2015, 02:47 AM
assuming it lines up better than what i've shown in the first pic ... nice

an alternative ponder, the second pic ... nice

i am a tad more intrigued by the second because it is perhaps less predictable, could be perhaps perceived as more vast, potentially

la

Bevahlee
08-14-2015, 07:52 AM
Just played with the wall. I lose interest in the walls and thought you might play with reflections or shadows or something. I like these very much especially the fields

OziAfricana
08-25-2015, 04:29 PM
Thanks Beverly and La. I have already given this painting away. I really appreciate your critique and will take note for the next one.