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FandangoArt
08-10-2015, 01:51 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-10-2015/1891992_image.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Low Sunflower
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 8x10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I used some rubber cement to create the additional white area of the border. I typically work in mixed media and sell a lot of grungier type pieces. This is several pieces in to exploring watercolor.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
This is my first piece up for critique. I live alone, so judging my own work is often difficult. This is one of those "really good /really bad" pieces for me.

EnPassant
08-10-2015, 03:13 PM
I like this. Colour is great but you could have made the petals a bit more yellow, brighter. Very nice loose brushwork.

Bevahlee
08-10-2015, 06:02 PM
well I like it just as it is with a more antiqued look to it. brightening the sunflowers would make it more ordinary and traditional