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Johan58
08-10-2015, 01:50 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-10-2015/1967424_far_away_land1.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Far away land
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
please critique


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
the mountain does it stand out?

bvanevery
08-10-2015, 10:59 AM
Not sure I understand the question about the mountain. Stand out from what? You've got foreground rock structures; they don't look like distant mountains so much as nearby walls of stone. They're interesting to look at... they do make me wonder, do you actually have natural rock features like that in your part of the world? If so, lucky you. If not, well kudos to your imagination.

The mountain in the background, with the atmospheric perspective... that's what reads to me like an actual mountain. Big, far away.

Bevahlee
08-10-2015, 06:06 PM
I like your imaginative painting. The design is good, the only thing that bothers me is the shape of the green trangular shapes in the grass. It almost looks as if they were meant to be shadows, but I know they're not so it's odd they would be shaped this way. There might be some used in a biomorphic shape that would look more natural