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Milarea
08-07-2015, 07:17 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-07-2015/1967815_Cloudsand_Gees_copy.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Clouds and Geese
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 17
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Full critique please.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I feel that something is missing...

everelusive
08-07-2015, 07:55 PM
I really like it.
Perhaps some blue ing/greying on the ground towards the horizon to add depth?

The sky is stunning!!!

Milarea
08-07-2015, 09:36 PM
Thank you, everelusive. Yes, i will try to cool down the horizon.

everelusive
08-08-2015, 01:09 AM
I would love to see it when you do.

bvanevery
08-09-2015, 10:59 PM
It's fine, and I like that it's on fire. I don't understand wanting to cool down anything. The high contrast of the geese on the clouds works. I don't believe in depth as a goal, there's plenty of depth here anyways as is.