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Yombie
07-20-2015, 05:06 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-20-2015/1973517_IMG_20150720_013959(1).jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Ah
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 20x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
An open mouth.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Does it look disproportionate?
Is it too defined or not enough?

Dana Design
07-20-2015, 01:43 PM
I think it's a good start but I do find it too balanced across the top.

I don't see the "mouth" in this. Eliminating 25% across the right hand side makes a far more interesting composition. FWIW.

~JMW~
07-20-2015, 02:27 PM
Oh I didn't recognise it as a open mouth..
I'd suggest define the mouth /lips more , teeth could be a bit more white vs the yellow/green... then add the extra dribbles & effects.
and overall maybe thicker paint application

Yombie
07-23-2015, 02:38 PM
This was just a fleeting image I saw on a random abstract I had done, I have since destroyed this.

Thanks for all your thoughts! :)