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Jeanette Diaz
07-20-2015, 12:34 AM
GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Damary and Lola (woman with a hat and a cat)
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18 x 24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I think I'm almost done with this painting.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Constructive criticism.

Bevahlee
07-20-2015, 05:30 AM
love the composition and color. I just feel like she needs a quiet place behind her jacket. It's beautiful but the dots are fighting for attention. Here's an idea, but you'll have your own take on it. Maybe the concrete steps she's sitting on or something plain.

PeteL
07-20-2015, 01:40 PM
I'm really enjoying your colorful series! The clear outline around the hat and jacket along with the strength of the hair really bring Damary to the front of the picture. Her face and neck appear to be on the same plane- maybe a little contrast between these two surfaces? Lola is more obscure in this one. I'd like to see more of her, but that's just me - I like cats

Pete