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markr
07-15-2015, 12:49 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-15-2015/26982_446B_01.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: HWY 446 01
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 15x22
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I may work on this one some, I may leave it as is ... still unsure

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
the usual .. looking for strengths and weaknesses ... posting an earlier version first then will reply with latest version so we can see it big.

markr
07-15-2015, 12:50 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/15-Jul-2015/26982-446B_02.jpg 02

markr
07-15-2015, 12:52 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/15-Jul-2015/26982-446july15.jpg 04 (latest)

Bevahlee
07-16-2015, 12:24 PM
Love this. I have to admit I liked the first sky best, even the splish splashiness of it, but they're all just great. Very Diebenkornish but yours. Nice one. Wish I'd done it.

oldnmartist
07-18-2015, 12:13 PM
Nice architectural feel. Only criticism I have is that the overhead line is a little thick and distracting. Looked better in first pic.

TxArcht
07-18-2015, 04:51 PM
I like #4 the best. The blue sky gives a contrast to the orange line. Yes, the overhead line crossing the road is a little too thick. A very nice abstracted landscape! I like the style!