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markr
07-12-2015, 03:35 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-12-2015/26982_FOT910A.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Bottom Road 02
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 12x19
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
had a moment of panic when I realized I wasn't painting the road in the foreground in shadow .. threw down a dark color and squeegeed it

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I may work on this some more .. just thought I would share ... gonna repost in replies so we can see it larger

markr
07-12-2015, 03:36 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/12-Jul-2015/26982-bottomrd02.jpg

La_
07-13-2015, 11:19 AM
12x19, really? seems larger on the easel pic

like your paint application and color choices, but the comp seems really left heavy

la

Bevahlee
07-13-2015, 06:24 PM
love this, but La has a point. I think you could balance it with just a few value changes..maybe like this or another way. I think the distant green needs to be toned down too