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cordobesa
07-06-2015, 08:11 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-06-2015/1969512_DSC_0558.JPG



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: peony and stripped cloth
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 9x12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I tried to use the knife for the flower in a more impressionist way

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Please let me know what do you think

La_
07-07-2015, 02:49 AM
liking, it's bold
thinking more darks/strength to the blossom might be good, the background is taking a lot of the attention.

la

Bevahlee
07-07-2015, 04:51 AM
I like your composition. I agree with La and I would like to see that leaf overlap that stripe. They kiss and that's not a good design element.
Otherwise, It has a nice gentle feel to it.

cordobesa
07-07-2015, 09:30 AM
Thank you for your comments! I will increase shadows on the flower, change the position of leave. La and Bevahlee you are always there for me! Thanks

xislandman
07-07-2015, 11:10 AM
The cloth is a bit over powering but all in all its quite well done. I would not change the flower. In the future think about what is the most important subject...

cordobesa
07-07-2015, 03:10 PM
I made some little changes, hope it is better now. Thank you xislandman, I actually thought the flower would stand out more...but I really liked the cloth too...have to think more next time.