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Johan58
07-02-2015, 11:27 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-02-2015/1967424_sea_at_night.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Calm sea at night
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Use acrylic paint to create the seascape

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What do i need to change

dgford
07-03-2015, 07:20 AM
I don't work in acrylics so my suggestion will not be in how to handle the paint. I think the area below the moon should be much brighter as it will be reflecting the light of the moon. The brightness will be lessening as it nears the viewer. This is a difficult subject to tackle. Congratulations in having a go.
Geoff

Bevahlee
07-03-2015, 02:04 PM
You have a nice composition going here. I think you need more light on the ocean and more shadow on the palm trees and the moon has a perfect circle of clouds around it. Some would, more than likely cover part of the moon, or be lit up in some of the distance.