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Johan58
06-24-2015, 07:47 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-24-2015/1967424_1st_try_oil.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Night on beach
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
My first try with oil,

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
i still need to do some work on the waves

La_
06-24-2015, 09:35 PM
flat flat flat water horizon, always

light source, carefully consider where the light is coming from and where it's going, what it's touching, what it can reach and what it cannot reach

a little brighter moon and a bit of light on the right side water would help balance the left heavy composition

nice rocks!

la

dgford
06-25-2015, 01:16 AM
I agree with la. Light relief required very much --- especially in sky
Geoff