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JimR-OCDS
06-22-2015, 03:38 PM
I'm nearly done this painting of a small lobster boat harbor in Portland Maine.

However, I feel like there needs to be more junk, i.e. lobster traps, buoys etc.

Anyway, I figured I'd check for advice here in WC.

Thanks in advance


Jim

hunterpaul
06-22-2015, 04:44 PM
I agree.. I do think it looks a little sterile.. from my experience of areas like this here in the uk.. there are usually piles of Lobster and crab traps…

Idlewilde
06-22-2015, 06:35 PM
Something of interest like coils of rope, seagull/s, etc on the piles at the front, or a small dinghy moored to one of them to suggest a boat has been taken out earlier maybe?
Just a thought, but the painting is coming along nicely for all that. Well done anyway,
Cheers, Ian Wildey.

ColinS
06-22-2015, 10:07 PM
It's a nice painting. The red buildings and boat add a lot of energy. The reflection of the pier on the left should be going to the viewer's right, though, I think, despite leaning left.

cem
06-23-2015, 07:54 AM
This will be a nice painting. Very colorful. Good job on the clouds. You may want to strengthen the shadows under eaves, posts, etc. Nice work.

Mike L
06-23-2015, 09:39 AM
I agree with those who agree with you. Nicely done painting but devoid of the details that would make it so much better than nice. :thumbsup:

R/Mike

Dcam
06-23-2015, 12:02 PM
Jim: outstanding.
Give your whites a little color. I can see more value contrast coming also.
Derek

JimR-OCDS
06-29-2015, 06:42 PM
Finished

LavenderFrost
06-30-2015, 12:49 PM
Very good!

chammi kaiser
07-01-2015, 05:25 PM
It is a super painting and I like the additions but I would like to see the odd figure. Unless it were a night painting, there would definitely be more life around those moorings.