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EnPassant
06-04-2015, 01:39 PM
Another attempt at this. This time I loosely interpreted an image. Acrylic 12 x 14 inches. As always, comments appreciated. Thanks.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Jun-2015/1966540-Nefertiti3.JPG

Andre Yusin
06-04-2015, 01:56 PM
Oh, this is perfect!

cliff.kachinske
06-04-2015, 03:38 PM
Overall I like it. Face, ears, near shoulder very fluid, graceful, fluent. Well drawn, well conceived.

Far shoulder maybe located correctly but doesn't seem to recede. What happens if shoulder is just suggested?

Tonal transitions where neck joins torso a bit strong. Not sure about the line where the near shoulder exits the picture.

Mike L
06-04-2015, 05:02 PM
Looks good, but something looks out of place. Had to stare for a minute to figure it out - Are the bands of color under her throat and draping over her shoulders tattoos or decoration on a robe? If a robe, perhaps colors/shades/hues to strongly separate clothing from skin?

R/Mike

ArtMarkie
06-05-2015, 10:49 AM
This is lovely. I especially like the style.

LavenderFrost
06-05-2015, 11:47 AM
Very good.

chammi kaiser
06-07-2015, 07:15 AM
I like the others too but this one with its pure, clear lines and colours really gets my vote.

EnPassant
06-07-2015, 01:01 PM
Thanks all for your comments. Very helpful as usual :-)